[vox-outreach] Letter to local schools - draft

Bill Kendrick vox-outreach@lists.lugod.org
Fri, 17 Oct 2003 09:14:28 -0700


On Fri, Oct 17, 2003 at 08:29:46AM -0700, Jonathan Stickel wrote:
> 
> Rod caught all the little things I noticed.  My general impression, 
> though, is that the letter is a little too long and heavy on the 
> philosophy.

Any specific rewrites you could think of? :)

thx

-bill!